I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Isaiah, My name is Vanya and I’m a year 7 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I like your story about, The Ghostest Night Ever because in the start of your story it sounds like you’re trying to make it interesting because you're describing the school bus. One thing that you should do next time is to use a better font because I couldn't read your story properly.
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Kia Ora Isaiah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Vanya and I’m a year 7 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I like your story about, The Ghostest Night Ever because in the start of your story it sounds like you’re trying to make it interesting because you're describing the school bus. One thing that you should do next time is to use a better font because I couldn't read your story properly.