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Thursday, June 17, 2021

Adverbs/Write that essay

 The W sentence- makes the sentence sound thoughtful & Knowledgeable

Remember the rule:not every w word works as a sentence starter.

Remember to put the comma in when the parts affected by your

w word are finished.

examples-who,while,wheras,when,where,what,whilst,with

Whilst the class was eating, i read my book.

Where you like chocolate, others prefer candy. 

With money everybody, goes crazy.

where famous people live in rich places, other people lives in cites not so helpful.

whilst the teacher is writing down, examples we were writing down.

with money people, buy cars. 

when your in a test you shouldn't talk

when it starts raining you should go inside 

when the tagger comes you should run

when he walked home he said goodbye to his friends 

commonly everyone talks a lot 

calmly Taylor calmed down

quickly everyone started to work

suddenly everyone started to be annoying  

under the bridge there was troll

above the bridge there where cars 

up in the sky there are clouds

far in land live farmers

silently,  the cat stalked it's prey

anxiously i awaited my test results

fortunately the kai today was something good today

cautionly he knocked on the principals door and await a reply

The "ing' sentence

Use the-ing version of the verb e.g to run-running

Remember the rule-when you finish you-ing phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence.

Listening, watching, running, realising, emerging, grasping, speaking, analysing, signalling, exposing, gossiping, acknowledging,

exposing himself, he had no choice but to run

grasping for air he, swam back to shore

Realising the danger, people fled from the cities.

shaking away the nerves, he walked towards the microphone.

acknowledging the speaker, he bowed his head in silence.

realising he was late, he ran to school

watching TV, i slowly drifted off

listening to the cook, i tried to cook like him.

watching the performance, they were in awe

emerging from the dark, i took them out.

watching them, from high ground i told the boss


The "ed' sentence

use the ed version of the verb e.g to jog-jogged. This makes for a punchy start to your sentence.

Remember the rule-when you finish your-ed phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence.

some-ed words frustrated, surprised, excited, committed, undawnted, determind, overpowered, concerned, cornered, delighted, enthralled,

Example- Determined to win, Tony pushed himself the last meters of the sprint.

concerned for the welfare of others, the prime minister passed new laws.

frustrated by the ongoing rain, i stared our the window.

overpowered by the a lightning strike, i felt so strange

committed to the case, i went on to find the body

cornered by the crowd, he looked of a quieter place

delighted by the food, he asked for more

excited about the game, i played straight away

concerned about his uncle, he called for help.

surprised about a clue, on a cold case he used it to find the person



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