I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Isaiah, it’s Rikesh again from Paihia School. Your blog post about Piranhas is sounding really interesting because it’s something scientific. There’s one little problem; it’s really hard to read the text because it’s in a little box. It would great if you could make the box bigger. Besides that your blog is great, keep up good work.
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Kia ora Isaiah.
ReplyDeleteI like the plan you have used for your writing. I wonder how you could share it so it is not in that little box.
Hi miss its me Isaiah I was wondering if you are having a good day today Iv been kinda bored here I wish I was still at gilberthorpe bye
DeleteKia ora Isaiah, it’s Rikesh again from Paihia School. Your blog post about Piranhas is sounding really interesting because it’s something scientific. There’s one little problem; it’s really hard to read the text because it’s in a little box. It would great if you could make the box bigger. Besides that your blog is great, keep up good work.
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