I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Isaiah my name is Bella and I am a year 6 at Paihia School. I like your blog post about the garbage problem. It has really interesting facts about rubbish. It is really sad that that 14 billion pounds of rubbish goes into the ocean and kills lots of creatures. Also I like it how you added solutions to the problem. Maybe next time you could say how much rubbish goes into the ocean daily. Keep up the good work. Bella
Hi Isaiah my name is hope from Waikowhai Primary school i really liked the way you described your writing about garbage.The reason why i like your garbage writing it is because at our school room 9 are collecting plastic around the whole school.Maybe next time you could change the font writing to one font and maybe you could add some more details.
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Kia Ora Isaiah my name is Bella and I am a year 6 at Paihia School. I like your blog post about the garbage problem. It has really interesting facts about rubbish. It is really sad that that 14 billion pounds of rubbish goes into the ocean and kills lots of creatures. Also I like it how you added solutions to the problem. Maybe next time you could say how much rubbish goes into the ocean daily.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
Bella
Hi Isaiah my name is hope from Waikowhai Primary school i really liked the way you described your writing about garbage.The reason why i like your garbage writing it is because at our school room 9 are collecting plastic around the whole school.Maybe next time you could change the font writing to one font and maybe you could add some more details.
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